专题08(读后续写)(译林版2020)(解析版).docx

专题08读后续写经典基础题高频话题01人与自我一个人经历Passage120222023学年下学期江苏淮安淮安区高二期中调研测试Ifeltsonervous.Itwasthedayofmyinterview.IwokeupearlyjusttomakesureIwouldhavetimetogetprepared.ItfeltlikeanormalMonday,butforme,thisdaywasveryimportant.Therewasalotofpressure.Aftershowering,IputontheoutfitIhadcarefullychosenandlaidoutthenightbefore.Ilookedatmyreflectioninthemirror.uYoucandothis,''IencouragedmyselfIatebreakfastandfedmycat.Imademywaytothebusstopandwaitedpatiently.Asidefromtherapidtappingofmyrightfoot,noonecouldtellthatIwassonervous.WhenIarrivedatmystop,Iwalkedtotheoffice.ThebuildingwassotallandIfeltsmallinitsshadow.ButIalsofelthopeful.Thiswillbeagreatopportunity,Ithought.Andwhatistheretolose?Lookingdownatmywatch,InoticedthatIwasearly.Thisallowedplentyoftimetoreviewmyresume（简历）andfurtherpreparemyselffortheinterview.Thedoorsofthebuildingwereimpressive,allsteelandglassandverymodern.WhenIwalkedinsomeoneshowedmethewaitingareaandofferedmeacupofcoffee.Afterafewmoments,amaninanicesuittoldmetojoinhim.Aswewalkedtowardtheelevators,Ibegantofeelanxious.Thepalmsofmyhandsbegantosweat.ItseemedlikeanhourhadpassedbeforeIheardthe“ding"oftheelevatorsopening.Wegotintotheelevator,fullofmenandwomendressedtothenines.“It'squitealargeoffice/*themansaidtome.Ichucklednervously.Icouldfeelmyselfgettingwarmer.Icouldn,twaittohearthatcomfortingt4ding,thatsignaledanescape.Astheelevatorclimbed,Iagainnervouslycheckedmywatch.JuslasIlookeddown,ithappened.Paragraph1:Theelevatorcametoastopbetweenfloors.Paragraph2:1thoughtthatthismustbetheworstinterviewever.【答案】Version1Theelevatorcametoastopbetweenfloors.Mynervousnessturnedintofearatonce.ButIimmediatelyrealizedthatitwasbettertoactthantojuststand.First,Ipressedtheemergencybutton.ThenIaskedpeopletoleantheirbacksagainstthewalloftheelevatorandadjusttheirbreathing.Butsuddenly,amanjumpedupanddownirritably.44Whataterribleelevator!,hesaidangrily.Irushedtostophim.ttPleasestop!Itcouldbeverydangerous.Weshouldcalmdownandwaitforhelp!”Fortunately,everyonecalmeddownthen.Wejustwaitedandwaited.Ifeltanxiousandcheckedmywatch.1thoughtthatthismustbetheworstinterviewever.Obviously,Iwouldbelate,andIthoughtthat(heinterviewerscouldn,tbeinagoodmood.Finally,therescuersarrived,andassoonas(hedooropened,Ipreparedtoruntotheoffice.Butallofasudden,ahandrestedonmyshoulder.Iturnedaroundandsawthemansmilingatme.“Don'tworry,youngman.You,vedoneagoodjob.Congratulationsonpassingtheinterview/'Ichuckledinsurprise.Version2Theelevatorcametoastopbetweenfloors.Notknowingwha(waswrong,everyoneinitgotnervousquickly.Someonepressedtheemergencybutton,andweweretoldthatitwouldtaketherescueteamatleastanhourtocompletetherepairwork,whichmeantwehadtobetrappedinthisnarrowandhotspace,waiting.Hearingthis,peoplewereanxious,andIcouldn'thelpworryingabouttheinterview.Withtheclockticking,Ifellintodesperation.1thoughtthatthismustbetheworstinterviewever.Iwassofrustratedthatmywell-preparedresumewouldn,twork.JustwhenIgaveuphope,thebeautiful“ding”soundsetmefreefromthosemessythoughts.AreceptionistinasuitstoppedmeafterIhadsteppedoutoftheelevatorandinformedmeofanotherinterviewopportunitybecauseoftheincident.Atthatmoment,Icouldhardlydescribemyexcitement.Lifeisjustlikeaboxofchocolates,andweneverknowwhatwewillget.Sodon,tquithopingeveninthefaceofdifficulty.【导语】本文以面试为线索展开，讲述了作者在面试前一天晚上的准备工作以及正式面试之前的紧张心情。作者在进入电梯后，发生了意想不到的事情。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“电梯在几层楼之间停了下来。可知，第一段可描写作者在电梯突然停止之后所做出的安全自救行为。由第二段首句内容“我想这一定是史上最糟糕的面试了。”可知，第二段可描写作者因为之前在电梯里面的表现，面试通过了。2 .续写线索：感到恐惧按紧急按钮一让人们把背靠在电梯上调整呼吸幸运的是，大家都镇定了营救人员到达突然，一只手搭在作者肩膀上一恭喜作者通过面试感到惊讶3 .词汇激活行为类按紧急按钮：presstheemergencybutton/pushandholdtheemergencybutton让某人做某事：asksbtodosth./letsb.dosth.调整呼吸：adjustthebreathing/regulatethebreathing镇定：calmdown/kcepone'shead到达：arrive/makeit通过：passge（through情绪类恐惧：fear/dread幸运地：forlunately/luckily惊讶地：insurprise/inamazement/inastonishment【点睛】高分句型lButIimmediatelyrealizedthatitwasbettertoactthantojuststand.（that引导宾语从句）高分句型2FinalIy,therescuersarrived,andassoonasthedooropened,Ipreparedtoruntotheoffice.（assoonas引导时间状语从句）Passage22022-2023学年下学期江苏海门高二期中试卷Mygreat-grandmotherEileenisfierce,loyalandstrongandabitofalegendinherownlifetime,whichnowstretchesto92years.Ishouldaddthatwe,renotallowedtocallherGran,becauseshesaysitmakesherfeelold.Thatsummer,Ilostmyjobandfelthopeless.Oneday,Ipaidavisittoher.Shepickedupaboxwhichsheplacedonthecoffeetable.itThereyougo,“shesaid.tiYoudoknowwhatyou,redoingwiththesethings,don,tyou?”Itwasanewphone.Hercurrentmobilewasprettyancient.Iwasamazeditwasstillgoing."Yes,"Isaid.44Good.That,swhyIaskyou.Youyoungpeopleknowmoreaboutsuchthingsthanusoldies.Youcantakeithomewithyouandgetitallsetup,“shewenton.tThen,whenyoubringitback,youcanshowmehowtousemynewphone,suchasgettingontheinternet,sendinge-mailsandsoon."ShesmiledsosweetlythatIfeltasurgeofloveforher.Igrabbedtheboxandstdup.Settingupthephonewouldbeeasy.Itwasteachingherhowtouseitthatmayprovechallenging.ThefollowingdayIheadedbacktomygreat-grandmother,swiththephone.44