应用文写作：祝贺信（解析版）公开课教案教学设计课件资料.docx
专题06xxx（应用文写作）、【写作指导】把握祝贺的写作框架。祝贺信是在日常生活中对亲朋好友毕业、晋升、获奖、开业、订婚、结婚、生日等向对方表示祝贺而写的信。信中应表示为对方而高兴。祝贺信应当充满真诚和热情，收信人读后会感到喜悦和振奋。祝贺信必须表达由衷的感情，而且写信要及时。祝贺信是社交中的一种礼仪性信函。通常包括祝贺犷由和诚挚的祝贺及美好祝福的表达。其写作框架如下：万能写作模板XXX：表示祝贺及祝贺缘由；XXX：详细描述祝贺原因；第三步：再次表示祝贺并表达自己愿望和祝福。【素材宝库】兀积累之第一.写1.congratulatesb.on.祝贺某人作2.express/sendmysincerecongratulationstosb.onsth.为某事向某人送上我诚挚的祝贺目3.give/offermycongratulationstosb.onsth.为某事向某人表示祝贺的4.Congratulationsonyoursuccess.祝贺你的成功5.wishyousuccessin.祝你成功汇积累之第二剧1.Havetheopportunitytodosth.有机会做某事XXXXX2. succeedindoingsth./besuccessfulindoingsth.在中获得成功3. beproudof.takepridein.自豪,以为骄傲4. Practicedoingsth.everyday每天练习做某事5. Winthefirstplace赢得第一名6. comexxxx实现，成真7. achieveonezsdreams实现某人的梦想8. witnessyoursuccess见证你的成功I汇积累之第三再次表达XX1 .Everythingcomestohimwhowaits.功夫不负有心人。2 .Sincerecongratulationstoyouagain!再次真诚地XX你！1hopeyourfuturewillbeglorious.我希望你的未来是是辉煌的。【万能句式】一篇首句1. Iamwritingtoexpressmycongratulationson.我写信是为了祝贺你2. Congratulationsonyoursuccessin.祝贺你成功。3. Pleaseacceptmymostsincerecongratulationsandbestwishesforthefuture.请接受我最诚挚的祝贺和最良好的祝愿。4. Weareallproudofthegreatachievementsyouhavemade.我们为你己取得的巨大成就感到骄傲。5.1feelveryhappyforyourdreamhascometrue.我很高兴你终于梦想成真了。6. Itisdelightfulformetoknowthatyouareadmittedo11eredpromotedhaveachieved我很高兴知道你被录取、录取、晋升/取得了成绩。7. Iamwritingtooffermysincerestcongratulationsonyourpromotion/admissionsuccessvictorywinning我写信是为了对你的晋升、录取、成功、胜利、胜利表示最诚挚的祝贺。二篇中句1. Inmyview,youworkhardandbesidesthat,youareaveryintelligentperson.在我看来，你工作努力，而且，你是个很聪明的人。2. Iamsureyourparentsaregreatlyproudofyou.我相信你的父母为你感到非常自豪。3. Itcameasnosurprisetomethatyouwonthecontest.你赢得了比赛，对我不足为奇。4. IjustwantyoutoknowhowpleasedIamtowitnessyoursuccess.我只是想让你知道我是多么高兴见证你的成功。5. Youdon'tknowhowexcitedIwaswhenIheardthegoodnews.你不知道当我听到这个好消息是多么兴奋。6. Asthesayinggoes,“Everythingcomestohimwhowaits.4Finally,yousucceeded.俗话说，“功夫不负有心人。”最后，你成功了！7. Asyourclosefriend,Iammorethangladtoshareyour作为你的好朋友，我非常高兴地分享一下你的.。8. ItisbeyondwordshowpleasedIamatyour我对你的感到非常高兴。9.1canwellimaginehowproudofyourparentsare,whohavebeenanxiouslyhopingtowitnessyour我可以想象你的父母感到骄傲，他们一直焦急地希望见证你的。10.Inmyview,youarealwaysatalentedwithabundant/excellentandcompletelydeservethe在我看来，你总是一个有才华的与丰富/优秀完全值得。1LAfteryearsofassiduousstudyandhardwork,youhavereachedthismilestoneinyourscholarship,whichisareallygreatachievementyoucanbewellproudof.经过多年的刻苦学习和努力，你的奖学金达到了这个里程碑，这是一个值得你自豪的伟大成就。三篇尾句1. Iamsure,youwillmakeprogressandobtainevengreaterachievement2. IwishyougreatersuccessinandIamlookingforwardto3. Ihopethatthecomingyear（s）willbringyouafurtherincreasein4. 1willbegratefulifyoucanwritemebackandgivemeyouradvice.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.如果你能回信给我建议我会很感激。希望早日得到你的答复。5. CouldyousharewithmehowyouimproveyourspokenEnglish?Yourexperiencewillbeofgreathelptomeinlearning.你能与我分享你是如何提高英语口语的吗？你的经验将有助于我的学习。【满分模板】Dear（称谓）Itisdelightfulformetoknowthatyouare（说明缘由）.Iamwritingtooffermysincerestcongratulationsonyour（表示祝贺）.Asyourclosefriend,Iammorethangladtoshareyouranditis（语言无法表达我多么为你而骄傲）Inmyview,isarewardthatyourichlydeserve（肯定你的付出）.isthedreamfor,whereyoucanlearnfrom.（表达再次祝福）andIamlookingforwardtomoregoodnewsfromyou.Sincerelyyours,1.iHua名校模拟题提升练】1.假如你是李华，你的英国好友George即将参加“汉语桥ChineSe-bridge”决赛。他来信询问学习汉语的方法，现在请你用英文给他回信。内容要点包括：L祝贺进入决赛；2.给予学习方法建议；3.表达美好祝愿。注意：请尽量正确地使用必修一所学的单词短语和句型写作（此为主要得分点）1 .字数100词左右；2 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3 .不要出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；4 .开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：congratulatesomebodyonsomething祝贺某人某事DearGeorge,KnowingyouhavesuccessfullymadeittothefinalroundoftheChinese-bridgecompetition,IameagerlywritingtoYours,1.iHua【答案】DearGeorge,KnowingyouhavesuccessfullymadeittothefinalroundoftheChinese-bridgecompetition,IameagerlywritingtooffersomeadviceonhowtoIeamChinesewell.InordertoacquireagoodknowledgeofChineseculture,youaresupposedtoreadmorebooksincludingnovels.Consultingadictionaryisundoubtedlyagoodwaytoenlargeyourvocabularyandgraspitsusages.Makefulluseofyourtimetolistenandspeakbecausepracticemakesperfect.Congratulationsagainandbestwishesforyourbrilliantfuture.Yours,1.iHua（导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的英国好友George即将参加“汉语桥Chinese-bridge''决赛，他来信询问学习汉语的方法这一情况，用英文给他问信。【详解】1.词汇积累提供：Offer-give建议：advicesuggestion为了：inordertowiththeaimto扩大：enlargcexpand2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：KnowingyouhavesuccessfullymadeittothenalroundoftheChinese-bridgecompetition,IameagerlywritingtooffersomeadviceonhowtoIeamChinesewell.拓展句：BecauseIknowyouhavesuccessfullymadeittothefinalroundoftheChinese-bridgecompetition,IameagerlywritingtooffersomeadviceonhowtoIeamChinesewell.点睛【高分句型1JConsultingadictionaryisundoubtedlyagoodwaytoenlargeyourvocabularyandgraspitsUSageS.（运用了非谓语动词中的动名词作主语。）【高分句型2Makefulluseofyourtimetolistenandspeakbecausepracticemakesperfect.（运用了祈使句以及because引导的原因状语从句。）2.假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津，你的英国朋友ChriS在中国学习中文已满两年，即将回国。请你给他写一封e-mail,邀请他参加为他举办
