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托福作文写作范文详解题目：Somepeoplebelievethatvisitorstoothercountriesshouldfollowlocalcustomsandbehaviour.Othersdisagreeandthinkthatthehostcountryshouldwelcomeculturaldifferences.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.话题和题型分类文化类；双边讨论题型题目分析游客是否需要遵循旅游当地文化习俗思路提示A.需要尊重当地习俗是对当地旅游资源的保护可以避免文化冲突旅游最大价值之所在B.不需要文化交融有利于维持文化多样性可以发展商机，促进经济发展SampleAnswerNowadays,largeairplanescarrymillionsofpeopleeachdaytoandfromalmostallcornersoftheglobe,givingmostpeoplethechancetovisitdistantcountries.However,manypeoplearetroubledbyunfamiliarcustomsandtraditionsandarepuzzledbythewaythelocalsbehave.Personallyspeaking,Ithinkthatvisitorsshouldkeeptheirowncustomsandthehostcountryshouldwelcomeculturaldifferences.（首段开篇摆明观点:游客应该保留自己的习俗,接待的国家应该欢迎不同的文化）Somepeoplemaintainthatitisbetterforonetoadopthostcountries,culturesforthefollowingreasons.Firstofall,astheoldsayinggoes,“WheninRome,doastheRomansdo."Byobservingandfollowingtheirparticularwaysofdoingthings,travelerscangreatlyreducethechancesofmisunderstandingsandembarrassment.Secondly,anation'scustomsandtraditionsareoftenfascinatingandofferauniqueinsightintothatverycountry.Oftentimes,peopletravelinordertobroadentheirhorizonsormerelytorelaxandenjoythemselves,buttheseaimscannotbesatisfactorilyfulfillediftheyhavenoideaaboutacountry,sculture.Moreover,aperson,sinterestinandunderstandingofothers7waysoflifecouldhelptoestablisharapportwiththelocalpeople,becausepeopletendtofeelrespectedwhentheircustomsandbehaviorsareunderstoodandimitated.Bydoingthingstheirwayztravelerscanbecomemorelikeafellowmemberoftheirsocietyandthuswillnolongexperiencesuchcultureshocks.（文章第二段详细论述游客应该遵守当地习俗）Othersalsohavestrongreasonstobelievethatacountryshouldtolerateandembraceforeigncultures.Inthefirstplace,nocountryshouldclingtoitsoldcustomsandtraditionsatallcostsandexpectotherstofollow-suit.Cultureshouldalsobesubjecttochangesbroughtaboutbyadvancesinscienceandtechnologyandtheprocessofglobalization.Likeeverythingelse,numeroustraditionalpracticeshavebeenabandonedandpeoplearecreatingnewcustomsallthetime.Besides,insteadofchallenginganddamagingthelocaltraditions,thecustomsbroughtbyinternationalvisitorsactuallyhelptoenhancepeople'sawarenessoftheirownculturesbypointingoutthatwhattheymayhaveoncetakenforgrantedisreallynotuniversallypraisedbutratheruniquecharacteristicsoftheirownhomeland.Moreover,itisunjustifiableandunrealistictoexpectvisitorstoaltertheirwaysofdoingthingsandtoautomaticallypickuptheirdifferentbehaviorsandcustomsonshortnotice.（文章第三段，表达此话题的另一观点，即游客应该遵守当地习俗）AsfarasIamconcerned,thelatterviewthatpeopleshouldkeeptheirowncustomsandthatnationsshouldwelcomeculturaldifferencesandintegratethepositiveaspectsfromotherculturestoupdatetheirownismorelogical.Apparently,ifallareopen-mindedaboutdifferenttraditionsandbehaviors,theideaofaglobalvillagecouldcometruewithpeoplelivinginharmonyandeachenjoyingtheirownculturalheritage.（全文总结突出观点）满分要素剖析：语言表达本文讨论了两方面的观点，客观、全面地对该话题进行论述。文章条理清晰，清楚表达了作者的观点。文中一系列连接词，使得文章更为连贯、流畅：however,personallyspeaking,firstofallzsecondly,moreover,besides,asfarasIamconcerned0Somepeoplemaintainthatitisbetterforonetoadopthostcountries/culturesforthefollowingreasons.句型somepeoplemaintainthat.可用于议论文中表明观点。Othersalsohavestrongreasonstobelievethatacountryshouldtolerateandembraceforeigncultures.句型Othersalsohavestrongreasonstobelievethat.可用于议论文中表达与之前相反的观点。逻辑结构本文是典型的总分总结构的议论文。作者开篇先陈述事实并表达自己的观点，第二段和第三段分别对两种观点进行论述，使得论证更加客观全面。最后一段作者重申自己的偏向，突出观点。