读后续写：细节描写训练 学案.docx

Continuationwritingskill:descriptionWorksheet1.Theboyfelloffthestairsandthejardroppedtotheground.2. Shesmiledhappily.3. 分组讨论1）悲伤时候的动作？2）惊恐时候的动作?3）犹豫时候的动作？4）无聊时候的动作?5）愤怒时候的动作?4. Hearingthissimpleyetwarmyes,mywifeandIfeltveryhappy.Hearingthissimpleyetwarmyes,5他灵光一现。.6.不小心打碎了给妈妈准备的生日礼物后，我和弟弟Aiden一起想办法，打算做个蛋糕当礼物。（80words）Skill1.whattodescribeinascene?WhattOSeesayhea7dothink所见、所说、所听、所做、所想Skill2.Howtodescribeascene?分解动作，增加镜头感例：TheyrefusedOUrrequest.However,theycame,ShoOktheirheadsandspedup,onlytoIeaVeashanddirtdancingintheair.添加细节描写，增加质感例：MywifefeltverydisappointedanddecidedtogiveUDFingirsnumbedbythechillywind,throatchokedbydustyair,WefelteversoaloneonthecrowdedstreetsofNewYork-"WhoCanWeturnto?”mywifemurmuredwithafiercefrown.Skill3.Whatwritingskillstouse?通过介词结构彳列：WithtearsStTeamingdownherface,wordsfailedher.借助非谓语例：Shewept,hidingherfaceinherhands.动作描写与心理描写相辅相成开心时的动作？-跳起来，喜形于色，放声大笑或尖叫，奔跑等withpleasure,withaintheair,intolaughter沮丧受挫时的动作？声音变低，皱眉，叹气，低头，表情茫然，眼神黯淡等withalower,sigh,bow,ablank,thelightinone,seyes悲伤时的动作？-声音沙哑哽咽，泪流满面，嚎啕大哭，沉默不语等thevoicewashoarseand,tearsupinmyeyes,burstintotears1.aterinthedarkafterthemoviehadstarted,IheardHudsonnexttome,croakingtearswereslidingdownhisCheekS.（77IeKiteRunner追风筝的人）惊恐时的动作？一不自觉的后退，一跳而起，不敢动弹，用手按住胸口等makearunningstep,jumpone,sfeet,betootomove,besostartledby,one,shanduponone,s,beatthesightof.犹豫时的动作？一徘徊，左右为难，来回踱步，皱着眉头等withoutsayingaword,backand,bestuckindilemma,linger无聊时的动作？一到处漫无目的的来回走动，拿起东西放下，胳膊肘撑在桌上（发呆）等pacerestlessly,wanderaboutsomeplace,pacebackandforth,downthestreet,restone,sonthedesk愤怒时的动作?-低声嘟哝,放声大喊，恶狠狠地盯着某人看，挥舞拳头等,howl,atsomebody,waveone's添加副词，形容词彳列：Nanjinghaswitnessedthecontinuousemergenceofmanydistinguishedtalentsandnobleheartsaswellasmonumentalachievementsthatshonethroughtheages.南京，她有着层出不穷的风流人物和彪炳千秋的不朽业绩。用事物代替人做主语例：她笑了。AgentleSmiIeSDreadOVerherface.她出现了梦幻般的表情。Adreamy100kcameoverherface.我很激动Excitementtookmybreathawaywhenhebrokethenewstome.o自然环境描写例：Iwasimmediatelybytheskywiththicksilverliningcloudsaround.我立刻被天空和成群飘动的大朵白云所吸引了。（心情愉悦）Theskywasandthewholeworldseemedtobeinahugegray.天阴沉沉的，整个世界好像都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼罩。（心情忧郁）