读后续写：索道惊魂 讲义+课件+习作赏析（人与自我个人成长Word版）.docx

读后续写：索道惊魂一、题目MsJohnsonwillneverforgetChelsea,awoundedsoul.OvertheyearsChelseahadalwaysstruggled,bothacademicallyandwithself-confidence.Additionally,hermotherhaddiedafteraheroicbattlewithaterminalillnesswhenChelseawasafifthgrader.Asshebeganhersixthgrade,Chelseawasstillhurting.MsJohnsonworriedaboutherwithgoodreason.Eachfall,Ms.Johnsontakesthestudentsforafive-dayadventureatWolfRidge,anenvironmentallearningcenterinthewoodsofNorthernMinnesotaoverlooking1.akeSuperior.Theweekisfilledwithlearning,teambuilding,andovercomingseeminglyimpossiblechallenges.TheygoinOctober,andtheturningleavesoftreescometosymbolizethechangeshappeningtothestudentsovertheweek.ThestepsandgrowthstudentsmakeatWolfRidgebecomeametaphorMs.Johnsonusesthroughouttheyearasherstudentsfacechallengesintheclassroom.ThemostdifficultactivityistheHighAdventureRopesCourse,whichstretchesfromtowertotowerhighamongestthetreetopsfortyfeetabovetheground.Ms.JohnsonknewthisexperiencewouldbeparticularlydifficultforChelsea.Whenitwastimeforhertofastentheharness（安全带），Chelseawasalreadytrembling.Theharnessoffersphysicalprotection,butnotmuchmentalcomfortwhennothingbutaslipperyboardoranunsteadywireisbetweenyourfeetandthegroundfarbelow.ChelseasteppedhesitantlyontotheSwingingWoodBridge,andonlyaftertheinstructor'sencouragement,slowlymadeherwayacrossitsshakyboardsuptothefirsttower.WiththesupportofaChaPerone（监护人）stationedthere,shebeganherwayacrosstheBurmaBridge,madeofmerelythreewiresandstraps.Hertremblingbodyaddedtoitsshaking.Fromdownbelow,hergroundpartnersshoutedupSupportively,Comeon,Chelsea,you'redoinggreat!Chelseafinallyreachedthesecondtowerandeventuallysteppedoutontothenextchallengeandslowlyinchedherwayacross.Paral:Nowshefacedwhatformanyisthemostdifficultactivity:theSingleWire.Pare2:Thefinalchallengeisazipline(滑索),whichrequiresleapingoffthelasttowerandslidingtotheground.1.woundedadj.受伤的11.nothingbut只有2.academicallyadv.学业上12.slippery,slPOTiZadj.滑的3.aheroicbattle英勇的斗争13.unsteadyadj.不稳的4.aterminalillness绝症14.hesitantly迟疑地；踌躇地5.withgoodreason有充分的理由15.makeone,sway刖进6.overlookV.俯瞰16.stationVt.派驻7.symbolizesimbolaiz/v.象征17.strap/strasp/n.带子8.metaphormet0f(r)n.隐喻,18.inchone,sway慢慢地走过去象征across9.stretchstretv.延伸19.leapoff.从跳下10.fasten,fa：s（o）nv.扣紧；系牢20.slidetotheground滑到地面二、审题思考1 .原文中共出现了几个主要人物？（2个，Chelsea+MsJohnson）2 .前文情节中第一次成功的原因是什么？I（同学鼓励）3 .两段续写都是在描写开始闯关到成功的过程，怎么写的不一样？即，应该把侧重点放在什么上？答：成功原因是不一样的。第一次是老师鼓励，第二次是自己主动迎接挑战。暗线是自信心的重建过程。为什么会有这个重建？第二段她想到了什么才会这么坚定？因为想到了自己的妈妈的勇敢。三、微情节设计Paral:Nowshefacedwhatformanyisthemostdifficultactivity:theSingleWire.Pare2:Thefinalchallengeisazipline（滑索）,whichrequiresleapingoffthelasttowerandslidingtotheground.第一段：（1）她：害怕（2）老师：鼓励（3）她：闯关成功第二Tl(1)1.摇摇晃晃的单索道theunsteadysinglewire她：一开2.极度的恐惧desperatefear始害怕，3.下意识地subconsciously但是想4.后退一步inchastepbackward到妈妈5.察觉到sense就充满6.恐惧和恐慌nterrorandpanic力7.意识到perceive(2)8.处于放弃的边缘ontheedgeofgivingup她闯量9.克服overcomeIB10.发出支持的呼喊letoutasupportiveshout(3)11.她鼓起了全部勇气pluckedupallhercourage他人：12.手心冒汗palmssweat(ed)i她鼓13.两腿发抖legsshiver(ed)掌(4)14.努力做某事endeavourtodosth影响15.调整呼吸adjustone,sbreath16.与病魔搏斗struggltofightthedisease四、17.XX在她脑海中闪现XXflash(ed)intohermind教师下18.激发某人做某事的坚强意志fuelsb,sstrongwilltodosth水文短19.战胜她面前的挑战conquerthechallengesbeforeher语20.下定决心makearesolution(todosth)21.勇敢的courageousko'reid3ss/22.被包围besurroundedby23.雷鸣般的掌声thunderousapplause24.回荡echo五、连词成篇Paral:(1)切尔西一看到那根摇摇晃晃的单索道，她就感到极度的恐惧和焦虑，下意识地后退了一步。Theinstanttheunsteadysinglewirecameintohersight,desperatefearandanxietysurgedthroughChelseaandsheinchedastepbackwardsubconsciously.(2)约翰逊女士察觉到小女孩的恐惧和恐慌，意识到她正处于放弃的边缘。Sensingherterrorandpanic,MsJohnsonperceivedthatthelittlegirlwasontheedgeofgivingup.(3)“切尔西，与你已经克服的事情相比，这次挑战根本不算什么!”你会成功的!”约翰逊女士从下面发出了支持的呼喊。uChelsea,thischallengeisnothingcomparedtowhatyouhavealreadyovercome!Youcouldmakeit!”MsJohnsonletoutasupportiveshoutfrombelow.(4)犹豫了一会儿，她鼓起了全部勇气，踩上索道，最终到达了最后一座塔。Havinghesitatedforawhile,shepluckedupallhercourage,steppingontothewireandultimatelyreachingthelasttower.Para2:(1)切尔西手心冒汗，两腿发抖，努力调整着呼吸。Palmssweatingandlegsshivering,Chelseaendeavouredtoadjustherbreath.(2)母亲与病魔搏斗的画面在她脑海中闪现，这让她想起了母亲是多么勇敢，激发了她战胜面前挑战的坚强意志。Imagesofhermother,sstrugglingtofightthediseaseflashedintohermind,whichremindedherofhowbravehermotherwasandfueledherstrongwilltoconquerthechallengesbeforeher.(3)下定决心后，她勇敢而坚定地跳下了塔。Havingmadearesolution,sheleaptoffthetower,courageousanddetermined.(4)她刚安全着陆，同学们就把她团团围住了，雷鸣般的掌声在好几英里的树林里回荡。Scarcelyhadshelandedsafelyonthegroundwhenshewassurroundedbyherclassmates,thunderousapplauseechoingthroughthetreesformiles.六、学生优作赏析三*HW*jX域内作餐.高二书面褰达谷题蛾姓名：currentsOUius05ZQUIderhQ